Sunday, February 23, 2014

Week One - Part 2 - Original Song Lullaby of Thunder by Emily MacLeod

Here is the second part of the Songwriters Association of Canada's songwriting/ blogging challenge 6 new songs in 6 weeks, for week one my original song is Lullaby of Thunder. I wrote this song in one week below you will find my original lyrics and rough edit recording.

https://soundcloud.com/emilymacmusic1/lullaby-of-thunder

Lullaby of Thunder by Emily MacLeod

She can only sleep 
in the middle of a storm
The sounds of the night
Drowned out her aching mind

It’s a lullaby of thunder
for the restless, restless hearts
It’s a lullaby of thunder
for the restless, restless hearts
a lullaby of thunder

Busy buzzing like a bee
during the day she’s fancy free
But when the evening sits still
her pain feels like it could kill

(she need’s that)

Lullaby of thunder
for the restless, restless hearts
It’s a lullaby of thunder
for the restless, restless hearts
a lullaby of thunder

He use to rock her by
like a baby in his arms
but since the day he left
life’s lost it’s charms
Now there’s only one thing that can soothe her soul

Lullaby of thunder
for the restless, restless hearts
It’s a lullaby of thunder
for the restless, restless hearts
a lullaby of thunder

Copyright Emily MacLeod 2014

Week #1 Songwriters Association of Canada songwriting/blogging challenge

Hey Everyone! I am taking part in a 6 songs in 6 weeks songwriting/blogging challenge which is run by the Songwriters Association of Canada S.A.C. and led by Christopher Ward who written big hits like Black Velvet. 

Week 1: is all about song starters, different things you can do to get a new song on it’s feet: 1) Song Title 2) First Line 3) Themes. We had to pick song starters that inspired us from existing songs and then write some of our own. The second part of this challenge of course is writing a brand new spanking song from one of the original song starters, I will post that song soon. Check out my homework below ;) Emily Mac

Top 3 Titles:
#1. Hurt So Good by John Mellencamp , George Green
#2. Crossyed and Painless by The Talking Heads, Brian Eno
#3. Live and Let Die by Paul McCartney, Linda McCartney

Top 3 First Lines:
#1. Your love is like a chunk of gold hard to get harder to hold - The Same Love That Made Me Laugh by Bill Withers
#2.  Isn’t it amazing what a lonely heart will have you do just when you think your getting wiser - Fighting Suspicions by Rebecca Ferguson, Eg White
#3. Procrastination is the thief of time so all the wise owls say - The Hesitating Blues by Big Maybelle (Blues Traditional)

Top 3 Themes:
#1. Theme: All our good intent doesn’t make us good - Good Intent - Francois Tetaz, Kimbra Johnson
#2. Theme: Revenge - The Payback - James Brown, Fred Wesley, John Starks
#3.  Theme: Loss of Innocence - Logical Song by Rick Davies, Roger Hodgson (Supertramp)

Emily Mac's Top 5 Song Starters:
#1. Title: Vicious Tongues
First Line: An avalanche of words poured from her mouth
Theme: Gossip

#2. Title: Lullaby of Thunder
First Line: She could only sleep in the middle of a storm
Theme: Restless Soul

#3. Title: Shades of Envy
First Line: She meditates for hours trying to find the centre of nowhere
Theme: Envy

#4. Title: Better in Boots
First Line: She had enough of people stomping on her soul
Theme: Empowerment

#5. Title: Slippery Compliment
First Line: You always leave me feeling down
Theme: Peoples Hidden Agendas